4/8/09
ncantre | April 8, 2009I need to improve the clarity of objective. Its not focused enough on the job that I am applying for. I also need to have a reference section. My resume also need to sho more experience and the type of skills that I have to offer to the company. Using key words that the job posting had will also be something that I need to add into my resume and cover letter. Overall I think I have a great start, but I do have some adjustments to make. This peer review gave me some solid feedback.
9:39 am - 4-10-2009
Nick,
I think you did a great job of assessing what you need. Once you fix the little things, I think your resume will be great. I’m glad the peer review worked so well for you; it obviously gave you a great idea of what you need to add, and I think that’s the most important aspect of peer reviewing. Good luck with your resume; I think you’ll be great!
Jilian